Kia ora Alice, I enjoyed reading your writing. You have used adjectives well to help describe your observations. Was this part of a science experiment? What made the sand explode into a messy puddle?
You did a great job Alice with describing your sand potion. I liked how you said it looked like a puddle. I really love your picture you created of your sand potion.
Kia ora Alice, I enjoyed reading your writing. You have used adjectives well to help describe your observations. Was this part of a science experiment? What made the sand explode into a messy puddle?
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job Alice with describing your sand potion. I liked how you said it looked like a puddle. I really love your picture you created of your sand potion.
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